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Original: "Playground Philosophy"

Okay, so I finally caved and did this thing. XD

I picked this original image because I really wanted to improve on the concept: two characters having a conversation at a kid's playground. The original's just sort of mindless: characters staring (or glaring) off into the distance, mouths open like they're talking. I wanted to take that idea and improve the story, while still keeping conversation open to interpretation. Now there's actual interaction between the characters, a deliberate mood, and more information in the image. :3

Obviously I also made other changes. Drake's design's changed dramatically, and I replaced Paul with Justin because Paul and Drake don't really talk to one another. Went with an autumn scene to go with the mood (plus I'm excited for fall). My old pic was waaay color-crazy. Oh, and background, I think I'm better at those now. XDD

Kiinda' bothers me that my shading technique hasn't changed much in seven years. >.> I think I know what I'm going to start working on now...
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Mood: Love ~TrishaBeakens Sep 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Now thats a HUGE improvement. I love the colors on the right one. :heart:
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~ZhaneAugustine Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have to say I like them both!
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~melisalex Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it!! XDDD
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~Drag0n-Princess Sep 17, 2012
WHOA!, thatīs a big change !!!!!
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~Kamuk Sep 16, 2012
It looks super cool :)
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=Fyuvix Sep 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
XD Thats awesome dude! I don't even REMEMBER that old piece!!!! The second one has so much more mood and stuff
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~Morfe22 Sep 16, 2012
You have definitely improved, although the first picture still stands the test of time very well. I think the second picture conveys more emotion and is more engaging to the viewer. I find myself completely intrigued as to the contents of the letter and i'm fascinated by the expression of the big guy reading it.

In short, it looks fantastic :)
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~Mirthrah Sep 16, 2012
The background on the second one is much more realistic than random kids' playground a grassy field x3
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*ChaosKomori Sep 17, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Haha, yeah. That is a playground in the middle of nowhere. XDD
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~Madd-D Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAH WOW WOW <333 You really know how to capture mood and character now!! It's stunning! <3
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